Forever Lasting Love

by Brittany C   May 19, 2007


When she looks in his eyes
she sees her future.
The clouds seem to part
when ever there together.
everything is once again
beautiful and surreal.

Life is magical with him in it.
She's no longer lonely all the time.
With him there she is free as a bird,
flying on the wind in the blue skies.
Her soul now freely souring high
and her heart has strong wings to flow.

He is her one true love.
Their love will last forever,
even when one is long gone
no longer among the living.
They now they will find each other,
among the angles in the clouds above.

Their love is forever lasting.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    Personally I really like this poem. I especially like the first stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Connie

    Personally I really like this poem. I especially like the first stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow that poem is so deep in emotion but so true as well espically in this line
    "When she looks in his eyes
    she sees her future." thats excalty how i feel when i look into my bf's eyes am,amazing how guys can do that :P
    a nice image was created in my head and the words u used and the way u arranged them kept me reading
    great job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hugh Coffey

    Well done. You write from the soul! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Now, this one was aweosme. I really liked the emotion, the words portrayed your feelings remarkably well.
    Another 5/5 i think
    love Tara-Kay
    xxx

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