It was good.. i think the flow was a little bit off. but overall a really sweet poem 4/5

I liked this 1..though u could hv used better words to express the depth in a good way...but..:-)...yeah i liked this 1 the way it ws...it did have it's own beauty and sweetness
=)5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Wow, great poem, its so sweet :D I think the flow was off it was a little hard to read, but other than that I really like it~! :D

True love is definately love that lasts forever, even if something were to happen and your no longer together that love will always be. Great job and great flow, nicely done 5/5

This poem .. yes it has some grammar errors, but its no big deal.. I lke this poem but it seems to me that its missing something.. your metaphors is really good, but it needs something.. I cannot help you because If i help you figure out.. you'll never learn on your own and become the better poet than you are now...that's for me to say and for you to figure out.. good luck and keep up the work i love it god job! 4/5

The imagery is outstanding. Its surreal.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

This one is a good free verse with beautiful meanings. Ur comment means a lot to me n I will change it. :D
TC

Now this for me is one of your best poems the imagery was great the vocabulary was outstanding you just overall did a really good job

I hope and pray that there love will be the forever lasting love. that will be so good.
nice poem. short but nice 5/5

I hope and pray that there love will be the forever lasting love. that will be so good.
nice poem. short but nice 5/5

A wonderfuk thought that love could last forever. The vocab was great, the word choice was excellent, and the imagery was amazing. emtion was clear and strong, and again free verse rocks. 5/5

Now, this one was aweosme. I really liked the emotion, the words portrayed your feelings remarkably well.
Another 5/5 i think
love Tara-Kay
xxx

Well done. You write from the soul! :D

Wow that poem is so deep in emotion but so true as well espically in this line
"When she looks in his eyes
she sees her future." thats excalty how i feel when i look into my bf's eyes am,amazing how guys can do that :P
a nice image was created in my head and the words u used and the way u arranged them kept me reading
great job
5/5

Personally I really like this poem. I especially like the first stanza.

Personally I really like this poem. I especially like the first stanza.