Lovers Night

I love this poem although I guess I would have to call it free verse because I don't see a rhyming scheme... anyway, good imagery and I liked it very much. :)

The second stanza got me a tad confused. As he holds and kisses her what? As starts a sentence when there is going to be something following. As in...As he kissed her she couldn't help but to smile. You did have a sentence afterwards but if that was a part of it they should have been in once sentence together. Ya know? It just threw me off because there wasn't anything until you got to the next sentence.
The last stanza has a similar problem. I thought it would sound and look better if there was a comma before while making it one sentence.
Either than that stuff it was a decent poem. I'm not one for love poems though. They usually bore me because they tend to use the same words over again and reflect a lot of other love poems that look just like it.
Sorry I'm bashing on your poems. I'm sure there's one in here I'd really enjoy I just picked the ones that I guess just don't suit me. :/ 3.

Aww very cute
it kind of reminds me of this scene in my book i love it now you made me want to go read lol nice work keep it up!

Good piece with a nice flow. U like free verse poetry i guess. Well 4/5 k tc

You use such vivid descriptive words that I can actually picture this scene in my head. thats amazing, the poem was amazing, and you are a amazing writer. keep it up. 5/5