Wow. This poem is so nice. The words worked well together I could see from the view of the firefly. This is my favorite stanza:
Forgotten little firefly
lighting up the sky
land upon soft fingertips
and teach me how to fly

Great job, and thanks for the comment :D. 5 all the way!

Hatori
The Illusionist

I LOVE this one!!!

"Forgotten little firefly
forgotten little girl
broken, twisted, messed-up lives
caught inside a whirl"

^this was my favourite stanza

You are a true artist with amazing talent!!!

Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

Josie