Mohamed
Beautiful poem. Your word choises are so elegent. The imiagery in this piece are great.

Colours of the rainbow shine so bright
Up in the blue sky twinkle light
Removing the borders and taking my wishes
With all my love and humble kisses

How could one not like these words as a Birthday wish :)
Take care Cindy

Beautiful wishes of birthday. great work. its special i think.

Very well written. The poem was catchy, with an excellent flow and wording, as always. I could tell you cared deeply about the subject and were writting from the heart =) Great job, once again!

5/5

Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

It is very interesting. It is good but it could be even more better. I don't prefer love poetry. Second stanza is the greatest. I like imagery of this piece.

This was a really nice poem for a birthday poem. I liked the whole thing in fact I gave you a 5 great job Plot121

Wow what a nice poem to wish happy birthday! Loved the word choice and the flow was perfect!

Tc