Like the last line, but little does he know, we're already dead
That's the strongest one in my opinion and so a great line to end your work, it makes people remember it and think it over

I really like it people not like it because they dont want to belive it but sadly its true 5/5

I like this.
It is true.
Toni
5/21

Wonderful poem

Yeah this poem is good....its sad how much people believe it...its just sad.....i mean...its just cant make sence.. if you want to talk about GOd and HIS chracter...read the Bible..it might help you better understand who HE is and how WRONG you are.....its YOU AND ME that destroy our lives ...NOT GOD...alot of People dont believe that ..but ITS SO TRUE.. okk lets "SAY" God is like that...we deserve it anyways...