Fatal Kiss

Wow, the concept to this one was astonishing! It had me trapped the whole time. Your flow and word choice were great. And it was put together beautifully from start to finish! I liked the beginning... The concept of writing you used was unique and appealing to the eyes...

5/5 for sure!

Not really my kind of poem. but it was a good one!
Its very easy to read with great flow and its strong imagery really helps to understand and read through. Although i dont normally like these kinds of poems this one still kept me interested from beginning to end
xx
Taegan Emily

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This is probably the best poem I've read today. And, I think it's more because it has the revenge in it. It's something nine out of ten people want on the person who hurt them or broke their heart. It's just easy to relate to with a great flow and amazing emotion. :]

5/5

The middle was a bit shaky but ot was still really good.

quick question did HE turn her or someone else. if it was someone else then why seek revenge on HIM? if it was HIM how would she turn HIM?

ok so not so quick.
good poem lovely read
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

This definately deserves to go into my favourites, this poem again is brilliantly written, well done, xxo