One cold smile, a fatal kiss |
by Startle Me
I don't like the word "look" |
It had a good flow =] |
by Vanessa
One cold smile, a fatal kiss |
I really like the theme of this poem! |
by skynerraw
Wow, beautiful, loved the theme, very unique, loved the darkness in it, |
The insane girl forever cheers |
by SilentRebuke
Wow. really awesome. even the title drew me in. my lines were : |
by SilentRebuke
*favorite lines. not my lines. sorry. |
by 1Mistake
DUDE I LOVE YOUR POEM!! it is so cool my sucks compared to yours!! =O |
by Wallace
Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some o my poems. |
by Shelly
I really like this one, its great! keep up the good work :D |
by Ray Blue
Nice poem.Very dark poetry. 5/5. |
by Gerard Kurt
Very well written. This could be interpreted either darkly or lesson-giving. Definitely a 5. |
by sarah
Wow! i luv the flow ov tha poem and the ending has a nice touch! keep it up :) |
by kitkat girl
There are soo many good things about this poem!! to name a few i love the title, and the unexpected change of the girl from good to bad. |
by Marc Ortiz
A great poem! Flow was good I like the theme of this poem! well done. and thanks agian for the comment :) I enjoyed reading this one! |
by lish
This definately deserves to go into my favourites, this poem again is brilliantly written, well done, xxo |
by Spirit
The middle was a bit shaky but ot was still really good. |
by Teria
:D |