Not really my kind of poem. but it was a good one!
Its very easy to read with great flow and its strong imagery really helps to understand and read through. Although i dont normally like these kinds of poems this one still kept me interested from beginning to end
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Taegan Emily

Wow, the concept to this one was astonishing! It had me trapped the whole time. Your flow and word choice were great. And it was put together beautifully from start to finish! I liked the beginning... The concept of writing you used was unique and appealing to the eyes...

5/5 for sure!