This is a very unique poem, I have never read one about a firefly I don't think lol It was done pretty well but you last 2 lines don't rhyme while the reast do, so 4/5 from me. I won't downgrade your poem but if you still want the 4 just let me know. Good job

I thought it was very different to most poems, most SAD poems have to do with people, but not a DEAD firefly, anyhow the rhyming was very good, and the flow was great to, 5/5