Comments : Unknown Murder

  • 17 years ago

    by silence

    Very good and kinda creepy at the same time. Something you actually see? Very well written :) I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well written but a bit unclear.

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Now that wasn't bad, a little creepy in thought but I can see that the trumoil that may be running through your mind. Just know once you get through the teen years your thoughts will become more clearer. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday young lady.

    sadaddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    That is great. It is sort of dark, but it is sad too. It was wonderful. Good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Correana

    Its so sad