The Wonder's As You Sleep

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 19, 2007


Everyone in this world has dreams.
Whether they be good or bad,
Scary or maybe depressing?
Funny weird or even sad?

Well, what're *Your* dreams like?
Do you dream of people you know?
Or maybe one's you've not met?
Do you even remember how your dreams go?

Do you have those dreams that,
from them you wish you wouldn't wake?
They are way better than your life,
but then again, we know dreams are fake....

Not the greatest of poems, I need to make it longer I think, if anyone has any ideas, lemme know please. =) Thanks for reading.

Oh, and.. I need a better title I think. Anyone have any ideas?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    How about Dreaming of reality ?-- with the ?
    Or Dreaming in ( )

    Regardless you have a good start to a good concept. I am anxious to see it grow

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...cool...short though yet well done!
    Beautiful!!...the queston in this write really made me think!=)
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    I liked this..it just gave me chills!!!

    a new title how about?................lifeless dream or wanted reality or awaken

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