I liked this..it just gave me chills!!!

a new title how about?................lifeless dream or wanted reality or awaken

Wow!!...cool...short though yet well done!
Beautiful!!...the queston in this write really made me think!=)
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

How about Dreaming of reality ?-- with the ?
Or Dreaming in ( )

Regardless you have a good start to a good concept. I am anxious to see it grow