Soo true once again.. lol, great flow. amazing job. i love ur work 5/5

Different but I like it. You worded the feeling and confusion in the poem very well. Not far out at all but flawless enough to know they stemmed from a human mind. 5/5 good work

Diffrent, but diffrent is good, that was well written, beautifully penned, great flow, and strong emtion.

Another wonderful one. I usually don't like this style of poetry, but after reading your I'm going to have to give it a better chance. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson