Nice poem and good message. I notice here, every posts about society is few, more on love,sad,depressions,dark horror, you stand among the crowd,like your poem. 5/51

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Ray

This is so true.. life will hopefully get better

That was very good
I liked the words you used to write about this topic

This is such a wonderful write! you are a very talented person! 5/5 please rate and comment some of mine!

-Ashley

I liked this one. It was different. 5/5

I enjoyed this one also, It was a bit short and left me hanging but the message and Idea was great. I must say that the third stanza breaking apart from the rhyming scheme threw me off for a bit but all in all it was good. 4/5

I really enjoyed this piece the humanity in it was masterfully done and the message shined bright great work Plot121