I tried

by MARI   May 19, 2007


I tried to be your friend
but all you ever did was hurt me
how can you live your life so happy
when thanks to you someone is unhappy
why wont you give me a chance
i am not like your other friends who just use you
i actually care about you i tried
so hard to be your friend
but all you think is that this is joke
so I'm done with your s**t
and hope one day ur unhappy

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    It's good, not your best-but good.
    I can see that all your poems are about rly important issues to you-the emotion is very livid in all of them.

    Im going to give this one a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Dang, well i liked the reason with this write. i had one of those friends 2.

    ~tia

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Not as good as your others, but I still liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I like it!!!lolno but its a good one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    Good work 5/5 make more =]]

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