This was very good I can relate 5/5
and the title drew my attention to this poem I liked it

Very beautiful work!..lovely poem...filled wth perfection n the emotions well portrayed n...i did'nt find any much errors in this 1....the choice of words was perfect n it's a well written heart felt peice..
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

It was a nice poem. Maybe you should break it up a little bit, like into stanzas. I think it would be a lot more powerful. Very emotive, and I truly enjoyed it. Great work

Alesia

But there was more to you.
Things I couldn't understand.

I love those lines . I could definitely relate . Reminded me of my exes . You should break it up into stanzas -- Makes it easier to read rather than have everything bunched up .in one whole squished poem (:
But stil good .
..__MiNDYY

Wow...that was amazing! You put forth the emotions and i think a ton of people could relate to that! I love the ending! I cant wait to read more of your poems!!! 5/5 great job!
~Love and Trust~

Overall nice job. At times the rhyme scheme felt a little forced and it didn't flow as well as it could have. But other than that it was pretty good.

Wow this poem is really well writen lived it!!!

That was fantastic =) I loved the flow, the wording and the emotions flowing through it ^_^ I give it a well deserved 5 =) By the way I totally loved your quote and despite what some people might say it made perfect sense lols 5/5 on that as well =)
Rhea The Dark Angel Of The Night

You have amazing talent this is a delightful read it really captures the imagination again I feel it could be split in to more than one stanza.