Engagement Ring

by Tim Mauntler   May 20, 2007


I know I love you
I would do anything
You live so far away
But here's your engagement ring
You wanted white gold
But they were out
Here's my love
That's what this is about
I will get you a ring
to show our loving bind
but something like that
is only a physical sign
When i get our wedding rings
It'll be what you want
but something that expresses my love
can never be bought
I know I love you
I would do anything
You live so far away
But... Will you marry me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is an extremely beautiful poem. I loved it. The imagery created here was perfect. You have actually created most of every girls dream. The only thing you need to do is add some punctuation; even though it didn't matter much in this piece. You also need to tighten up the flow of it a bit because some parts were a bit off, but I liked it. Great job on expressing your emotions and painting a picture of love.

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    The ending itself was amazing!!! I can tell that you put alot of thought into this one Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Lol, a great poem and I love how you ended it! A great story and a great topic. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    But something that expresses my love
    can never be bought

    I love those lines and they are sooo true.. i love the way you put it.. nice poem altogether.. nicely written and very sweet.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    OMG I WISH A GUY WOULD SAY THAT TO ME WHEN THEY PROPOSED TO ME! ITS SO CUTE..5/5 KEEP IT UP!

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