OMG I WISH A GUY WOULD SAY THAT TO ME WHEN THEY PROPOSED TO ME! ITS SO CUTE..5/5 KEEP IT UP!

But something that expresses my love
can never be bought

I love those lines and they are sooo true.. i love the way you put it.. nice poem altogether.. nicely written and very sweet.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

Lol, a great poem and I love how you ended it! A great story and a great topic. 5/5

The ending itself was amazing!!! I can tell that you put alot of thought into this one Keep it up 5/5

This is an extremely beautiful poem. I loved it. The imagery created here was perfect. You have actually created most of every girls dream. The only thing you need to do is add some punctuation; even though it didn't matter much in this piece. You also need to tighten up the flow of it a bit because some parts were a bit off, but I liked it. Great job on expressing your emotions and painting a picture of love.

Letty