Comments : His Story

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Nicely penned. Good work! 5/5

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    Live with no regrets.
    Learn from your mistakes.
    Love with all of your heart.
    And laugh till you cry.
    This is your story,
    All you have to do is tell it to the world

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    Ray Blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    I love it! It shows that you should believe in your self and show who you are and what you feel. Very good poem, Keep writing! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    Thats really inspiring and beautiful....

    mercy...

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very beautiful and inspiring! Nicely done ;o)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    How right you are. What an inspiring piece! My page says LIFE IS ART......this poem furthers my beliefs! NICELY DONE!!! Wonderful write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Keith

    Cool poem, it talks sense :)

    thanks for the coment on my stuff by the way

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    I love it... 5/5