Awww i love this poem. it is very emotion. good job.`

I liked this piece alot! You should try writting something with a twisted ending. Alot of people on here write straight happy or straight sad. I enjoy pieces that start happy and end tradgically. =P But thats just something I enjoy. I would love to see something like that from a writter such as yourself =D

Its very well written.
good job. [: