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by Jesse May 20, 2007 category : Love, romance / first love
The twenty-third of November The best day of my life The day I most easily remember The day I fell in love with you How could I forget That night at the Ramada Inn When I came to watch the jazz band play And left with a crush I've known you forever But we lost touch Then you came to Keith And we began to talk so much I knew three of my friends had dated you So I didnt want to fall But the next thing I knew I had already fallen You sent my friend a message Saying you had to talk to her After talking to you for a while She said "Hey what's your number?" My cell phone rang And I hoped it was you We talked for a while Then you asked if I liked you too When I told you my answer I didnt know what to think I sat and waited for your response My hands began to shake You told me that you really liked me Then asked me to be yours After I smiled and jumped I told you "Of course" Now I sit here A year and a half later And think about all our memories And how I couldnt be happier You mean so much to me I know what we have is true I can't see myself with anyone But you The twenty-third of November Oh what a day The twenty-third of November Our love is here to stay
by Ray Blue
Nice poem. 4/7. I liked your collaboration. Just make little bit short and it'll be perfect. Good Work!