by Robert May 20, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Her skin is rough from the weather she faces every day, |
by Nobodys Hero
I loved the chioce of poem you decided to write about it added extra difficulty yet you managed to make the poem work well, overall i would say this poem is very good, great job! |
by Mr. Darcy
A touching and inspiring write. |
Excellent poem. Took my breath away. I do agree with Michael.. it would be easier to read if it were put into stanzas.. Other than that it's great. 5/5 |
You seem to have captured the plight of a homeless woman very eloquently. It is indeed a very worthy theme and the poem is well written It would however be easier for me to read broken into stanzas |
by homebound
Wow! great imagery and really made me think and experience what was going on! awesome job! |