Great poem, VERY true, nice flow, great topic, nice to read, nice vocabulary :D I can't think of anything wrong with it!!! Loved it

An Amazing Flow... Very Nice I'm Mad Jealous Of You..
I Loved It! There Was Nothing Wrong About IT =]
5/5

It's so true that beauty is all that matters in the eyes and minds of most, but beauty doesn't last forever. I loved the meaning of the poem and the flow. excellent job 5/5

Very very nice poem and the meaning behind it is amazing and yet soo true.. excellent job.. keep it up =]

It was a very nice poem about how it is to be less attractive. Its quite sad. But nevertheless it had a great flow and it was good. 5/5 keep it up.

Confiedence, it's such a wierd thing wouldn't you say I can relate in more ways than one to this poem and I can take my own meaning which is good in my point of view you made it easy to adapt it to others lives kudos

I think this is really well written!! Great Flow and its a poem people can relate to.. 5/5

Once again, awesome work! Good topic and wonderful flow. Just flawless!! Xx Chrissie

This poem is amazing. its a subject that people deal with everyday... I mean most of the stuff that you write about does, but this is also personal for me and I think everyone can relate to not feeling whole at sometime in their life. like I said before, you have talent. keep it up. love this one!

Uhh
no what thats like
great job
you always know how to pull a reader in
and keep them in
wonderful write!!
5/5
love always kaila

And again a beautiful poem! flow was good in my point of view :) excellent choice of words! well written! Good job! 5/5 as always!

It's strange how we all find our imperfection monsterously huge. BUt when we look at other's it seems as if they have reached 'perfection'. We all tell people beauty is on the inside not whats on the out, but we still feel awful about ourselves..
Anyways M'Dear good choice in topic..
A splendid read.
Elaine

Now this was really excellent Imean the word flowed like water the message was clear, and your right so many strive to be perfect, i think this si the best poem i have ever read of your it deserves nothing less that 5/5

This is really indepth and shows what a teen may feel like! well done!!! =D

That was really good, athough i cant really relate to it. But i'm sure if i could, i would understand it well. But besides that, I liked it.

I really like this poem it has alot of heart put into it.
keep it up.
defin. love it. one of my fav.
<3Brandee

I liked it from the very first stanza .

Incompetent feeling does not resign,
Above the surface this sensation lies.
False smiles does not work for her,
For this woman has no disguise.

That definitely stuck out at me . Especially the last two lines in that stanza . I think the third line though, is supposed to be "False smiles do not work for her ." The VT isn`t right . Or maybe I`m not thinking straight .

But I really liked how you talked about this subject . Like "Her Majesty" you didn`t come straight out and say it . The flow was good, and the rhymes as well .
..__MiNDYY

This is a great poem.. the flow is fantastic.. also you described everything perfectly.. the rhymes were also wonderful.. they helped the poem be read smootly without overpowering the poem..

I found this poem to be beautiful. The meaning you portrayed throughout it was amazing and spoken with so much truth. I'm glad someone wrote a poem on this subject as it effects mant people. I liked how this poem kept me interested till the end because you kept the storyline to the very end. Well done with this~mel

This was quite a sad poem, mostly because we know how so many people strike for perfection, yet never really make it there. Excellently done.