Comments : I'll Never Forget

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. Keep writing.

    I'll never forget
    when i saw you with her
    when i realized there was no US
    we were never together

    This stanza is so sad and heartfelt
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    This was a very beautifully sad poem. I loved the flow and the pain you expressed. Very well written, keep it up. I hope you feel better soon.
    <3Raych

    and thanks for commenting my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sad peom.

    " I'll never forget
    all the tears or the pain
    sitting in the dark
    or crying in the rain "

    My favourite stanza.
    Very well written.
    Take care