The Whispers in the wind. {Contest}

by Run out of words   May 20, 2007


Itâ??s been weeks now darling,
What happened to us?
Because now Iâ??m really starting,
Iâ??m starting to lose trust.

You said that you were busy,
And that you wouldnâ??t be able to talk that much.
But that doesnâ??t mean you can ignore me,
And completely stay out of touch.

Itâ??s been weeks since I last heard,
Heard a word from you.
This silence is getting cold,
And I donâ??t know if Iâ??ll make it through.

So many words unspoken,
So many thoughts untold.
So many nights alone and broken,
This routine is getting old.

No one bothered to inform me,
You didnâ??t even care.
â??Have you lost interest?â?? I stopped to breathe,
But I realized that no air was there.

The wind was chill,
And the night was cold.
All the air was still,
With the things untold.

Things you thought,
But never said.
You kept it in,
Indeed you messed with my head.

But now I know,
I know where we sinned.
You didnâ??t have to even let you feelings show,
Because I heard itâ?¦
I heard it from the whispers in the wind.

**OMGGGGosh...I'M SOOO ON FIRE!!! = =...hehe this is my 3rd poem today...yes I am happy:) hehe comment for me pleeasseee...I've been writing all day...when I should've been studying.:( I will go now. **

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  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Wow, that was so good! I loved the way you used repetition which was reminiscent of high emotion and you had a distressed atmosphere running throughout which suddenly calmed in the final stanza. Brilliant xxx