You saw right through me

by isabel   May 20, 2007


You saw right through me
As my naked pain embraced me
You saw the whispers of my heart
You saw me laying in the dark

My sad appearance and fake eyes
You knew that they were only lies
You saw what my soul tried to hide
You saw all my feelings inside

Sadly, I wasn't meant for you
And there was nothing you could do
Forever ends my life of bliss
Forever dream that you ask a kiss

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Short and strong as always, the word choice was perfect, and the emtion heartfelt. I absoulty loved this poem. please keep writting.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Hey, I have read a few of your poems now! you are a very strong writer, you right such short poems with so much emotion and meaning! Well done, as you said my poem reminded you of yourself, so do most of your poems for me. Keep up the amazing work, this is definitly a strong talent! Your one of my favs!

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