Debbie
This poem brought tears that won't stop. To close to my heart.

Nobody's child is gone for today
Somebody loves her, she smiles and she plays
Arms hug her closely, tender the care
If she's hungry or lonely, her angel is there

Thank God for her angel.
Excellent poem Debbie. Lets hope this is the end of her sadness.
Love you
your sis Cindy

Omg that brought tears to my eyes you really ahve a talent for writting poetry

IM so glad it had a good ending nice poem 5/5

Excellent poem, great flow sad and deep:Nobody's child falling fast through the cracks
Precious time lost, can never give back
I can agree on that ,thanks for sharing, your friend Tracy 5/5 great job

Wow, this brought tears to my eyes also. you have a wonderful talent.
Nicely done.

Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some o my poems.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Nice poem. really touching. sad how that can happen. nice ending, though :)

Such a sad and moving poem, but a great ending. keep writing great poems

Ever so sad. such a beautiful little child. thank god for good people who step up and handle other responsbilites. 5/5

This really saddened me to think that there are so many kids out there so lost and lonely. enjoyed reading this, it is perfectly written. x

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah its awsome. i realy understand you this words. and i loved your poem take care

Is this really happening because its horrible. An unattended child? He will be worse when he grows up. Disturbing imagery, beautifully rendered in words. Although I hope this ones only a fantasy. Definitely a 5.

So true! I love this poem

WOW... the rhythm is PERFECT...what a message. great job!

Great work I really like this poem

Wow..amazing work, 5/5!

Wow that poem brought me right back to when I had to watch that happen to a child because she too fell through the cracks... Idid not make me sad though because I know that she is in heaven waiting for me to play with her and hold her. I gave you a FIVE for this poem and I look forward to reading more.

Oh, Debbie. I loved this one, it was so sad, i could see the little child, and it brought pain to my eyes.
A really sad and emotional poem, that was written wonderfully.
love Tara-Kay

Wow that's really all i can say....when you can bring tears to the eyes of those that don't even know you that's a gift..You have talent.

Nobody's child falling fast through the cracks
Precious time lost, can never give back

The Angel comes....