Wow! I loved this piece Twisted Heart. You should really make a book of your poems. It would be beautiful to say the least. Your rhyme and flow is just about flawless! And your words and imagery are superb!
Charisma*

Jeannie
Your verses always move me. This was no exception. Ths sadness in this piece brought tears to my eyes.

Tender comes the night to hold
A broken heart, a broken soul
That lives alone among the gray
Inside the thoughts of yesterday.

I sometimes wonder how many of live in our thoughts of yesterday. Excellent job on this form of poetry.
Take Care Love Cindy

Jeannie you have mastered this form with ease and created a poem that brings tears to the eye.

I would bet my last dollar that you would make the most amazing country song writer .... I say you should give it a shot Auntie ...

Wonderfully penned!
Luanne