Awww...ver sweet work....beautiful..i've a thing 4 babies...lol...maybe tht's y i found this mother-baby poem cute!..kp it up!
5/5!...
xxPoojaxx

Liked the topic, it was sweet, but it seemed awkward at times to me, in the beginning but then at the end it got better, I really liked, it was great :D

Very sweet poem. Ireally liked it. It had alot of emotions it. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Nice poem, you seem to love your baby.

~*Alex*~

Well, this poem was probably the sweetest poem I have ever read. The emotion was amazing with these lines, and you spoke true to your heart. There needs to be more poems like this on our site. A wonderful job, good luck with everything. =]

Aww sweet poem. there were some gremmatical errors though. mmm...i cant get over how cute it is. 5/5 on the heart and rhyming put into the poem.

What a beautifull write ,with every new thing your baby learns its a moment to treasure and you'll hold on to every one of those treasured memories.

Hey gurl this poem is great its a mothers love and it made me cry when i read it keep it up!

Such a touching poem. It really describes the love in the mother-child relationship. Great word choice and great imagery. Wonderfully written poem

Keep writting

5/5

"i love you sweetie,
more than life itself.
no one can take you from me,
not even god himself."

Good job, ^ is my fave. part
Perfect poem and fab. words
5/5

Awwww so sweet...

there are a few grammer mistakes and a typo or two...

"it seems just yesterday you was in my belly"

was should be were....

"take you time baby"

in this line you should be your....

but other than that this poem was well written.

This reflects the most beautiful bond on earth

Aww, this is really nice. I'm gonna give birth to my baby next month n I'm happy to be a mommy. I really, really loved this poem.

5/5

What a truly sweet poem, you sound like a wonderful mother. Keep on writing! 5/5

Awww a mothers love really is the strongest of them all :) oh im all glassy-eyed after that :') cograts btw :)
Xx...[retro babii]...xX

The flow was a tad off
but it didn't really matter because this was a beautiful poem
I truly loved it
babies are adorable
4/5 kaila

Awwwz how cute!!!!
i really liiked this poem...
i writting from the heart!! 5/5

<3 i love you silly