by firexdancer May 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
When your eyes are black with dew, |
by Startle Me
Brutally honest, babe. |
Your poems are absouletly amazing. This one speaks to me of the inner pains of yourself and how sometimes you just wish you were invisible to the rest of the world and that they would just leave you alone. You captured the emotion in this poem perfectly. The flow and rhyme and everything just made this poem wonderful. It was a wonderful write and a better read. I absoultely loved it! I honestly can't express how happy your comment on my poem made me and how much that meant. Thank you so much. 5/5 for sure. |
I loved thip oem too. You gave of more than one meaning so people can interpret it there own way. I lvoe how your poetry leaves your audience open to wonder. |
by Brittany C
Very nice poem. I loved the flow. It was a longer one but you made it work. 5/5 |
by Vanessa
The imagery left me breathless, omg that was so amazing, it spoke to my soul and keep my attention all the way til the end, absoulty perfect, there is no way to improve on perfection. I love this really keep writting you are so talented. 5/5 |