Excellent poem , very sad and i feel your pain,nice flow and it was very well written, i loved it keep up the good work,your friend Tracy

Great poem. I really liked the ending. I also liked the format and I thought that the length of the poem was just right. Keep up the great work. 5/5

This was a real nice poem The flow was good the stanza was good the grammar had a few boo boos but all is good. The message was great, Hallmark where are you when you are needed. Great job, the only thing would be I would question the man's motives for being this nice. There is always a thing of cause and effect, the man's actions would have to be understood. That the only thing I would need to have explained but the poem was great kudos Hun!!!! Plot121

Dang that was something, so sad a first, and so happy at the end, I agree with robert what is the man motive?

Beautifully written and the story is nicely flowing. great 5/5