Comments : Tell me

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow this piece is so deep and meaningful... i realy liked this stanza:

    Do you really understand my words
    Do you hear the fear between the lines
    Do you see I am scared inside
    Or do you ignore all the signs

    I think a lot of people are wondering these words to themselves, i know i am wondering... anyway, beautifully worded. 5/5

    ~NinjaGirl~