by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex May 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The keyboard's clacking away, but it's so loud I can no longer hear your voice above the sound. |
by Miu
It's so powerful. Imagery was amazing. Enjoyed reading this. Unique because it's just overwhelming. Loved your layout also! |
Aweh man! You made my poem with this title look like utter crap, lol. I love your descriptions and your imagery was great. There was one thing though, in the line .. "your very precious to me" 'your' should be 'you're' :] |
by Startle Me
Your poems feel a little bit weird. |