Comments : First Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by Iris

    Very expressive!!

  • 17 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Nice rhymes

  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    Wow! I really like this poem. very romantic and expessive. 5/5 good job and keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    This was a great poem! i think that's how most people picture thier first kiss: they dont want it to end! nice word choice and it was perfect in rhyming! cant wait to read more from you!
    ~Love and Trust~