Take me

by Haleigh   May 20, 2007


Sometimes I think about your face,
There are times I don't thinkn of you at all,
Oh- how we fell from grace,
There was no way to prevent this fall,
You'll never know how special you are,
If you ever came back this way,
I wouldn't be too far,
We could start another day,
Start our life from scratch,
Stay together forever in this land,
I promise nothing else could beat this match,
If you decide to take away your hand,
I'll be strong, understand and let you go,
But ask me to wait- for you,
We can even take things slow,
Whatever happens, happens & we'll make it through

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    You have one minor spelling error you need to fix: "don't thinkn of you at all"
    Aside from that, your rhyme scheme is rather inconsistant, so I couldn't really catch the flow. The meaning of the poem has the potential to be quite deep, but I don't feel that your message is clear. I think this is a great poem for girls in relationships to read, I'm very sure they'll be able to relate to it!

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