I love it and it is the truth

I like it but I know you can do better than this! XD nothing is wrong in the poem but in my point of view it lacks 'strong words' and imagery but overall its a good poem! XD I'll give it a 5/5! keep writing well done

WOW, WOW, WOW This is a great and sad and true poem...people dont relize that stuff like this happens all the time, i love the ending and man i can relate to this poem and i cant belive how good you put it in words! 5/5