Money Is Key

This poem is so sad and speaks so much for its length. Todays music is good, but it gives the wrong message to the young ones who listen to it. *5/5*

Alyson

That is very true about life.. about kids doing crack and becomes so interested in money.. true but yet so bold love it.. its a very blunt poem on your side of an opinion and that is wy I love it good job and keep up the work !

~victoria~

Sadly this is quite true, perfectly penned, amazing word choice, excellent show of deep emtions, perfect once again 5/5

Disheartening, but very true in today's world. Always pointing out the world's mistakes for the blind, I know where to come for a good read. but back to the topic, the final stanza was my favorite a great ending to a great poem. Again a bit short but to the point and descriptive enough to drive the point through a reader's brain. well done again 5/5

Short sweet and too the point. well not sweet, but true. so true. what is our world coming to! 5/5. you attacked a great topic that people need to realize.