Short sweet and too the point. well not sweet, but true. so true. what is our world coming to! 5/5. you attacked a great topic that people need to realize.

Disheartening, but very true in today's world. Always pointing out the world's mistakes for the blind, I know where to come for a good read. but back to the topic, the final stanza was my favorite a great ending to a great poem. Again a bit short but to the point and descriptive enough to drive the point through a reader's brain. well done again 5/5

Sadly this is quite true, perfectly penned, amazing word choice, excellent show of deep emtions, perfect once again 5/5

That is very true about life.. about kids doing crack and becomes so interested in money.. true but yet so bold love it.. its a very blunt poem on your side of an opinion and that is wy I love it good job and keep up the work !

~victoria~

This poem is so sad and speaks so much for its length. Todays music is good, but it gives the wrong message to the young ones who listen to it. *5/5*

Alyson