Comments : I Love You

  • 17 years ago

    by Bre

    It is good but if yoyu really want to improve then try putting spaces inbetween the lines you write it will add meaning and depth
    but i love this poem you write like me i mean i don't ryhm either and i spelled that wrong anyway good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlie

    Aww this is sweet...this is well written good job 5/5