by Robert May 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A prison with no bars to hold you in, |
by Not
I COMPLETELY AGREE I BELIEVE THERE SO MUCH MORE PEOPLE CAN DO TO HELP THOSE IN NEED, I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU WROTE THIS POEM , TOO MANY PEOPLE WORRIED ABOUT SENSELESS THING WHEN THERES BIGGER PROBLEMS TO WORRY ABOUT, BEAUTIFUL POEM...5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I really enjoyed this, I found it to hold such power and intensity. |
by xxSuicidalxx
Great poem!!! Love it! Very powerful and touching! You're so right about how we should help others who are going hungry in places! Good point! Give this one a 5/5!!!! |
by SpEcIaLmE
This poem is very emotional and deals with an issue that is happening in the world 2 day, it was great the way u structured it and it flowed nicely great work |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, the lines were very creative. And you put very strong emotions into it. Although I think it would have been better with punctuation to kinda neaten it up a bit. But it was great, good job 5/5 |