by Sourav
Very nicely written. Well thought out! |
by Vanessa
Omg Robert that was effin powerful, I really loved the words you used i could see clear images of half starved people riddled with disease, so sad, so vivid. amazing Robet simply amazing. 5/5 it deserves no less. |
by Brittini
Imagery really good, makes me speakless really good in every way can't give you anything but 5/5 realy amazing keep it up |
by Ashley Ann
Very effective and touching..5/5 |
by CHOKE
If only everyone would help to stop world hunger, but im not sure that will ever happen. although, i hope that it does end. i loved this poem, it was quite intriguing and the imagery was amazing. 5/5. |
by Mo
I love reading about subjects that matter to the world - so self-less and meaningful. |
by Fsams
"if we all help each other then maybe hunger will simply go away." |
by Beautifully Nothing
Amazing subject! you are such a good writer. wow, reading that kind of gave me chills (good chills) amazing job!!! |
Very nice poem, its amazing and touching. |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, the lines were very creative. And you put very strong emotions into it. Although I think it would have been better with punctuation to kinda neaten it up a bit. But it was great, good job 5/5 |
by SpEcIaLmE
This poem is very emotional and deals with an issue that is happening in the world 2 day, it was great the way u structured it and it flowed nicely great work |
by xxSuicidalxx
Great poem!!! Love it! Very powerful and touching! You're so right about how we should help others who are going hungry in places! Good point! Give this one a 5/5!!!! |
by Jenni Marie
I really enjoyed this, I found it to hold such power and intensity. |
by Not
I COMPLETELY AGREE I BELIEVE THERE SO MUCH MORE PEOPLE CAN DO TO HELP THOSE IN NEED, I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU WROTE THIS POEM , TOO MANY PEOPLE WORRIED ABOUT SENSELESS THING WHEN THERES BIGGER PROBLEMS TO WORRY ABOUT, BEAUTIFUL POEM...5/5 |