Unkown

by StonedGooberz   May 20, 2007


Sadness falls from my face
tears of my madness
intertwine within the
beautifully woven lace.

Purple for it was my color
it was so simple but yet
so simple, the cost 20
something dollars

knife in her hand
gleaming with such
a horrid vivid red.
it was not love at the command

but her insanity, taking hold
she was angel i had waited for
now she is floating away on her wings
her body....it feels so cold

grabbing the phone, i feel so alone
as i tell the cops about the blood
and the 2 bodies shaped like a heart
we will be together floating through the unknown

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Knife in her hand
    gleaming with such
    a horrid vivid red.
    it was not love at the command

    These wur my fav lines
    got me all choked up.
    I think this was a great poem. good flow and i like the form. everything was in it's place i thought. nothing bad to say. great work

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Really dark and powerful.
    "but her insanity, taking hold
    she was angel i had waited for
    now she is floating away on her wings
    her body....it feels so cold" -great lines.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Romantic wes.. wth.. shes dead!
    I really like the first 2 lines the "sadness falls from my face tears of madness" I really like that line =D.
    Nice use of enjambement, I guess it really fits in with your poem.

    Keep it up, xxx

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