Romantic wes.. wth.. shes dead!
I really like the first 2 lines the "sadness falls from my face tears of madness" I really like that line =D.
Nice use of enjambement, I guess it really fits in with your poem.

Keep it up, xxx

Really dark and powerful.
"but her insanity, taking hold
she was angel i had waited for
now she is floating away on her wings
her body....it feels so cold" -great lines.
5/5

Knife in her hand
gleaming with such
a horrid vivid red.
it was not love at the command

These wur my fav lines
got me all choked up.
I think this was a great poem. good flow and i like the form. everything was in it's place i thought. nothing bad to say. great work