Comments : I Believe

  • 17 years ago

    by Zeus

    It was great. i loved the vocab. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem:

    The lies they mutter,
    Trying to get me to stutter,
    To believe you cheated,
    And ended up in bed heated

    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    LOL` I learned a new word ! [abhor] I had no idea what that meant so I was like ... Is that even a word ? xD Anyways,
    I liked it . Definitely how I feel all the time whenever I hook up with someone . Just wish they`d understand that too -.-
    I think you did a great job with it .

    The lies they mutter,
    Trying to get me to stutter.
    `Definitely my favourite lines . It just tells everything and gives you a good idea from the very start what this poem is about .
    Loved it .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Abhor. I LOVE that word! lol It was very good. Different because most poems on here talk about how people DID cheat on someone else. Nicely don. 5/5