What happend to me

by fatal bliss is the best way to die   May 20, 2007


As i stand here tonight in the middle of my room with paper around me i wonder what happened to me what changed me so drastically so dramatically i used to be the sweet innocent chick the one who smiled for no reason now I'm walking around with black hair and long sleeves to cover the permanent scars on my arms that Will be there till the day i drop dead so tonight i finally thought about what happened to me

WOW THIS TOTALLY SUX GIVE ME SOME CRITICISM SO I CAN MAKE IT BETTER PLZ AND THANKYOU

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  • 17 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    Acually i really liked it keep it up and i like how u you keep it real (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    I dont have any criticism this is a great poem also good job and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by YOU MAKE ME SMILE

    I totaly no what ur talking about i feel that way 6 out of the 7 days of a week
    that was great

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    I gave you 5/5 because it came from you and because of that it doesnt suk cuz its real not fake i like it =]]

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