She lies

*Tear* That's a REALLY GOOD poem,I can really relate to it :') 5/5

The hurts of love and what it can do to a person. I remember being so hurt and thinking no one would ever love me for just me. Man that was many moons ago and also not so long ago. Funny how those hurts withstand the test of time and no matter how much we think we hate them...... we only wish we could because the love is too deep.

Dixie

This is very good!! I love it too i hope you dont mind if i send it to someone.. great job 5/5

This was a bit different but good nonetheless. The expression you put in was well worded. Well done.
cheers, josh