Good times

by crystaljean88   May 21, 2007


Were gonna go have fun,
and let it all come out.
i don't know what you think,
but i know what were gonna be about.

all fun and games,
no worries about life.
no sad and silly emotions,
absolutely no thoughts about a knife.

happy thoughts and good times,
is all that will happen.
i wish this night would never end,
wishing it would just began

no regrets and or shame about this time,
giggles and pictures will remember this day.
memories and poses is what life is,
this is the night all my pain will go away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    The last stanza is a bit long, it contains many short words.
    The rest of the poem is nice. (:

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I like this poem because it finally shows a different side of you, a side that wants to let loose and have fun. Good for you and good job on the poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gizmo

    ^ agree

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Very nice, sort of a cut loose type of poem. it was well written with a good format

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a light hearted ramantic poem that I enjoyed reading

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