by crystaljean88 May 21, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Were gonna go have fun, |
by Keath
The last stanza is a bit long, it contains many short words. |
I like this poem because it finally shows a different side of you, a side that wants to let loose and have fun. Good for you and good job on the poem! |
by Gizmo
^ agree |
Very nice, sort of a cut loose type of poem. it was well written with a good format |
This is a light hearted ramantic poem that I enjoyed reading |