Our last chance

by sara   May 21, 2007


It was so simple that night
Just take my hand, it will end the fight
Everything will be all right

Life would be still
We would just dance
Just look in my eyes because if you wont my heart just dies

I saw you walk in and my heart sank
And then my mind went completely blank
I told myself you would make everything fine
I started to walk and your eyes met mine
All the memories that we have had, it must be a sign

I started to remember what it was like
Then you reminded me it was our third strike
I did not care lets try again
You said what is it your trying to attain
All this love does is cause us pain.

It doesnt bother me I'm willing to hold on
To me, what we have is so strong
Why give up now
I remember us giving a vow
To love for ever and also be together

Don't take back now what you said in the past
Cause my love for you is so willing to last
I don't ever want to let go
I hope you feel the same, even if your feelings don't show

If you think not loving me is the only way
Please change your mind and stay
All I can do now is pray and say

I love you with all of my heart
And for the rest of my life I'm hoping you don't ever depart.
I'm here waiting
So stop debating
Be with me
And that is my only plea

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem ,wording was great and if was very sad with a lot of feelings in it, I can relate to what you are going through , going through myself ,great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can totally relate, wow you just made me really depressed, im in the situation in fact, great descripition and transition 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.