Hiding in the Closet

by kolorful   May 21, 2007


I'm hiding in my closet,
From that man outside my door.
I'm sure he knows I'm here,
But I can just sit here, filled with horror.

I remember how he first got here,
It was only an hour ago,
He rang the doorbell, gun in hand,
Why he came, well, I don't know.

My father answered, what a fool,
I was standing right next to him,
I saw my father fall to the floor,
Bullethole in head, his expression was grim.

My first reflex was to run and hide,
I didn't know what I was doing,
I saw the stairs and headed for them,
Thats when he started shooting.

He went on a rampage throughout the house,
My mother was the next to go,
As I ran down the upstaris,
I heard her say, "Help! Let me GO!"

BAM! There goes a gunshot,
I just assumed that she was dead,
That's when I heard him walking up the stairs,
So to the closet I sped.

I heard him walk by the closet,
And then back by again,
I wonder if he knows I'm here,
And is just messing with my head.

So I'm hiding in my closet,
From that man outside my door,
I'm sure he knows I'm here,
But I can just sit here, filled with horror.

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  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    Wow...that had a lot of thought and emotion put into it! I had a dream exactly like that and it was freaky! wonderful job on this one! keep it up! 5/5
    <3 Love and Trust <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    very graphic and horible..(image wise)
    the imagery was superb
    wonderful job
    nice work
    love always
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Great Poemx

  • Very nice..

  • 17 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Great poem...5/5..It gave me the chills....Keep Writing!